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minus-squareObjectivityIncarnate@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up16arrow-down2·17 hours agoThis is two panels too long, imo. Change the first panel’s text to “Forgive me, Helen, I’ve changed!”, the second’s to “Have you, Theseus?”, and you’re done, lol.
minus-squarex00z@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up4·15 hours agoI needed the little punchline in panel 3 to remember it.
minus-squareZozano@aussie.zonelinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up3·17 hours agoWho stop there? Make it one panel with stacked speech bubbles.
minus-squareObjectivityIncarnate@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up7·17 hours agoThe punchline should be on its own panel to create a natural temporal gap between it and the setup, for the reader. :)
minus-squareidunnololz@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·8 hours agoinsert joke of Theseus here Please clap.
This is two panels too long, imo.
Change the first panel’s text to “Forgive me, Helen, I’ve changed!”, the second’s to “Have you, Theseus?”, and you’re done, lol.
I needed the little punchline in panel 3 to remember it.
Who stop there? Make it one panel with stacked speech bubbles.
The punchline should be on its own panel to create a natural temporal gap between it and the setup, for the reader. :)
insert joke of Theseus here
Please clap.
Please Clap